Re: [PATCH v2 7/9] docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough

On Thu, Mar 04, 2021 at 03:23:43PM +0800, Alex Shi wrote:

在 2021/2/28 下午1:40, Wu XiangCheng 写道:

quoted

Improve language and grammar of zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst

Signed-off-by: Wu XiangCheng <redacted>
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 .../zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst         | 141 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
index f509e077e1cb..c5442c356dad 100644
--- a/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst
+++ b/Documentation/translations/zh_CN/process/6.Followthrough.rst

@@ -1,145 +1,152 @@
 .. include:: ../disclaimer-zh_CN.rst
 
 :Original: :ref:`Documentation/process/6.Followthrough.rst <development_followthrough>`
-:Translator: Alex Shi <alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com>
+
+:Translator:
+
+ 时奎亮 Alex Shi <alex.shi@linux.alibaba.com>
+
+:校译:
+
+ 吴想成 Wu XiangCheng <bobwxc@email.cn>
 
 .. _cn_development_followthrough:
 
 跟进
 ====
 
-在这一点上，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能
+此时，您已经遵循了到目前为止给出的指导方针，并且，随着您自己的工程技能

Seems there are many lines shorter than before, this may make new
doc are bit more ugly and cause reader uncomfort, consider your change
may widerly used or reference for long time. Line width control is
very meanignful and valuable things.

Would you like try to refill all shorter lines, make context more
pretty?

OK, good suggestion.
I'll try to fill the shorter lines or return at a word or punctuation.
But I won't fill a modified single line in a large paragraph, that may
cause many unnecessary line changes.

Thanks
Wu X.C.