Re: [PATCH] fix doc typos

Miklos Vajna [off-list ref] wrote:

On Tue, Jan 29, 2008 at 08:38:55PM +0100, Jim Meyering [off-list ref] wrote:

quoted

 Here is an illustration, by Jon Loeliger.  Both node B and C are
-a commit parents of commit node A.  Parent commits are ordered
+commit parents of commit node A.  Parent commits are ordered

wouldn't this be "Both commit node B and C are parents of commit node A."?

That does sound better.
While you're word-smithing, how about s/node B/nodes B/, too:

  "Both commit nodes B and C are parents of commit node A."

Send a patch.