13145886936@163.com writes:
* Ergo, before the AppleTalk module can be removed, all AppleTalk
- * sockets be closed from user space.
+ * sockets should be closed from user space.
*/
This is a good correction, but in the other case
/*
* Phase 1 is fine on LocalTalk but we don't do
- * EtherTalk phase 1. Anyone wanting to add it go ahead.
+ * EtherTalk phase 1. Anyone wanting to add it goes ahead.
"go ahead" is meant as an imperative (like "If you want to add EtherTalk
phase 1 support, please go ahead [and do so]"), not an indicative (like
"If you want to add EtherTalk phase 1 support, you are adding it"). It
is an invitation addressed to future developers.
Addressing unspecified people directly in the second person with "anyone"
is a little unusual, but is grammatically acceptable (more usually with a
comma). Anyone reading this, you now understand this point.