Re: [PATCH] Documentation: PCI: pci-error-recovery: rearrange the general sequence

On Thu, Jul 01, 2021 at 05:22:31PM -0500, Bjorn Helgaas wrote:

Please make the subject a little more specific.  "rearrange the
general sequence" doesn't say anything about what was affected.

On Fri, Jun 18, 2021 at 02:04:46PM +0800, Wesley Sheng wrote:

quoted

Reset_link() callback function was called before mmio_enabled() in
pcie_do_recovery() function actually, so rearrange the general
sequence betwen step 2 and step 3 accordingly.

s/betwen/between/

Not sure "general" adds anything in this sentence.  "Step 2 and step
3" are not meaningful here in the commit log.  It needs to spell out
what those steps are so the log makes sense by itself.

"reset_link" does not appear in pcie_do_recovery().  I'm guessing
you're referring to the "reset_subordinates" function pointer?

Yes, you are right.
pcieaer-howto.rst has a section named with "Provide callbacks",
the callback supplied to pcie_do_recovery() was referred to 
reset_link.
 

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Signed-off-by: Wesley Sheng <redacted>

I didn't quite understand your response to Oliver, so I'll wait for
your corrections and his ack before proceeding.

OK.
I thought step 2 MMIO Enabled and step 3 link reset should swap sequence.

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---
 Documentation/PCI/pci-error-recovery.rst | 23 ++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/PCI/pci-error-recovery.rst b/Documentation/PCI/pci-error-recovery.rst
index 187f43a03200..ac6a8729ef28 100644
--- a/Documentation/PCI/pci-error-recovery.rst
+++ b/Documentation/PCI/pci-error-recovery.rst

@@ -184,7 +184,14 @@ is STEP 6 (Permanent Failure).
    and prints an error to syslog.  A reboot is then required to
    get the device working again.
 
-STEP 2: MMIO Enabled
+STEP 2: Link Reset
+------------------
+The platform resets the link.  This is a PCI-Express specific step
+and is done whenever a fatal error has been detected that can be
+"solved" by resetting the link.
+
+
+STEP 3: MMIO Enabled
 --------------------
 The platform re-enables MMIO to the device (but typically not the
 DMA), and then calls the mmio_enabled() callback on all affected

@@ -197,8 +204,8 @@ information, if any, and eventually do things like trigger a device local
 reset or some such, but not restart operations. This callback is made if
 all drivers on a segment agree that they can try to recover and if no automatic
 link reset was performed by the HW. If the platform can't just re-enable IOs
-without a slot reset or a link reset, it will not call this callback, and
-instead will have gone directly to STEP 3 (Link Reset) or STEP 4 (Slot Reset)
+without a slot reset, it will not call this callback, and
+instead will have gone directly or STEP 4 (Slot Reset)

s/or/to/  ?

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 .. note::
 

@@ -210,7 +217,7 @@ instead will have gone directly to STEP 3 (Link Reset) or STEP 4 (Slot Reset)
    such an error might cause IOs to be re-blocked for the whole
    segment, and thus invalidate the recovery that other devices
    on the same segment might have done, forcing the whole segment
-   into one of the next states, that is, link reset or slot reset.
+   into next states, that is, slot reset.

s/into next states/into the next state/ ?

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 The driver should return one of the following result codes:
   - PCI_ERS_RESULT_RECOVERED

@@ -233,17 +240,11 @@ The driver should return one of the following result codes:
 
 The next step taken depends on the results returned by the drivers.
 If all drivers returned PCI_ERS_RESULT_RECOVERED, then the platform
-proceeds to either STEP3 (Link Reset) or to STEP 5 (Resume Operations).
+proceeds to STEP 5 (Resume Operations).
 
 If any driver returned PCI_ERS_RESULT_NEED_RESET, then the platform
 proceeds to STEP 4 (Slot Reset)
 
-STEP 3: Link Reset
-------------------
-The platform resets the link.  This is a PCI-Express specific step
-and is done whenever a fatal error has been detected that can be
-"solved" by resetting the link.
-
 STEP 4: Slot Reset
 ------------------
 

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