Re: [PATCH 0/5] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/

Hi Xiangcheng,

Thanks for polishing patchset, but i can find your patches in my email box.
and even in lkml. Except https://lkml.org/lkml/2021/2/14/33 the first patch.
Do I missed others?


在 2021/2/18 下午6:24, Wu XiangCheng 写道:

There are some errors in some files in zh_CN/process/, such as grammatical 
errors, translation errors and improper use of words etc., which make it 

Could you like to point out each of specific incorrect words with reasons?
Like the following incorrect I found in your patch:

A, And end users, too, will often wish to change Linux to make it
   better suit their needs.
  
   +最终用户也常常希望修改Linux，使之年能更好地满足他们的需求。
   I couldn't find a word means '年'/year in original context, do you?

B, Contribution of code is the fundamental action which makes the whole
   process work.

+- 代码的贡献是使整个流程顺畅的根本

the point of the process is 工作/workable, your transltion change it to
process 顺畅/fluency, why?


Thanks! 

difficult for native speakers to understand. Many errors are caused by 
machine translation without manual correction.

This set of patchs aims to fix the above problems and synchronize them with
original files. Some structure modifications need to rewrite the whole 
sentences, so here are a lot of changes.

Wu XiangCheng (5):
  docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst
  docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst
  docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst
  docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst
  docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst

 .../translations/zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst    | 146 ++++-----
 .../translations/zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst  | 296 +++++++++---------
 .../zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst           | 120 +++----
 .../translations/zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst   | 251 ++++++++-------
 .../translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst      |  10 +-
 5 files changed, 412 insertions(+), 411 deletions(-)