Andrei Rybak [off-list ref] writes:
A tricky case is usage of "that that", which is sometimes grammatically
correct. However, an instance of this in "t7527-builtin-fsmonitor.sh"
doesn't need two words "that", because there is only one daemon being
discussed, so the word "daemon" does not need a determiner.
Makes me wonder if it is more appropriage to replace the second
"that" with "the" there, then.
Other than that, everything else in the patch looks good.