Thanks, I incorporated all suggestions into the next version.

On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 5:11 PM Taylor Blau [off-list ref] wrote:

On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 07:41:49AM +0000, Julia Ramer via GitGitGadget wrote:

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.../howto/coordinate-embargoed-releases.txt   | 175 +++++++++++++++---
1 file changed, 147 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)

This version looks great, thanks for your work polishing it up based on
mine and Junio's review. I agree with what Junio said downthread in [1],
and left a few minor nitpicks of my own.

So, I don't have much to add beyond what Junio wrote. I suspect that
between my feedback below and his in [1], that should be enough to get
v4 ready to be queued.

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+- The security-list members start a discussion to give an initial

s/security-list members/members of the git-security list/.

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+  assessment of the severity of the reported potential vulnerability.
+  We aspire to do so within a few days.

Well put.

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+- Code review can take place in a variety of different locations,
+  depending on context. These are: patches sent inline on the
+  git-security list, a private fork on GitHub associated with the
+  draft security advisory, or the git/cabal repository.
+
+  Contributors working on a fix should consider beginning by sending
+  patches to the git-security list (inline with the original thread),
+  since they are accessible to all subscribers, along with the original
+  reporter.

There is some slightly odd wrapping between this and adjacent bullet
points. It looks like the width of these lines is slightly shorter than
the others.

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+- Once the review has settled and everyone involved in the review agrees that
+  the patches are ready, the Git maintainer, and others determine a release date
+  as well as the release trains that are serviced. The decision regarding which
+  versions need a backported fix is based on input from the reporter, the
+  contributor who worked on the patches, and from stakeholders.   Operators

There are a few extra spaces between "from stakeholders." and "Operators"

Thanks,
Taylor

[1]: https://lore.kernel.org/git/xmqqo7u5m8ku.fsf@gitster.g/ (local)