On Sun, Aug 29, 2021 at 11:36 PM Markus Jansen [off-list ref] wrote:
Tried to sort out tenses in the story, and added my usual tiny amount of correction suggestions in 34d65d4.
As usual, feel free to further correct/revert/rephrase etc.
Thanks for the fixes! They LGTM!
I like the backreferences to past editions, which I regard being a build-up mechanism for a collective/community memory :-).
Yeah, it's a balance between making things more useful without making
the text harder to read. But I think so far the result has been
positive.