Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason [off-list ref] writes:
quoted hunk
+A revision range such as `old..new` will produce a bundle tip that'll
+that'll require the revision `old` (and any objects reachable from it)
+to exist for the bundle to be "unbundle"-able:
Will squash in the following while queuing.
Thanks.
diff --git c/Documentation/git-bundle.txt w/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
index e7a685e533..6a45ced017 100644
--- c/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
+++ w/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
@@ -202,8 +202,8 @@ history that leads to the revision `new`:
$ git bundle create full.bundle new
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-A revision range such as `old..new` will produce a bundle tip that'll
-that'll require the revision `old` (and any objects reachable from it)
+A revision range such as `old..new` will produce a bundle file that
+will require the revision `old` (and any objects reachable from it)
to exist for the bundle to be "unbundle"-able:
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