On Mon, Aug 04, 2014 at 11:29:33AM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:
"brian m. carlson" [off-list ref] writes:
quoted
Avoid a nonsensical misreading by moving the modifier closer to the
word it modifies.
Signed-off-by: brian m. carlson <redacted>
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Documentation/git-imap-send.txt | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt b/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
index 875d283..23231e1 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ imap.folder::
imap.tunnel::
Command used to setup a tunnel to the IMAP server through which
commands will be piped instead of using a direct network connection
- to the server. Required when imap.host is not set to use imap-send.
+ to the server. Required to use imap-send when imap.host is not set.
To be honest, I find both versions are equally confusing.
How about dropping the three words "to use imap-send"?
Fine by me.
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