Thread (1 message) 1 message, 1 author, 2016-06-15

Re: [PATCH 05/11] Fix some typos and improve wording

From: Junio C Hamano <hidden>
Date: 2016-06-15 22:58:32

Thomas Ackermann [off-list ref] writes:
quoted hunk
Signed-off-by: Thomas Ackermann <redacted>
---
 Documentation/user-manual.txt | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 6241a43..465d9cb 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ of development leading to that point.
 
 The best way to see how this works is using the linkgit:gitk[1]
 command; running gitk now on a Git repository and looking for merge
-commits will help understand how the Git organizes history.
+commits will help understand how Git organizes history.
 
 In the following, we say that commit X is "reachable" from commit Y
 if commit X is an ancestor of commit Y.  Equivalently, you could say
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ e05db0fd4f31dde7005f075a84f96b360d05984b
 -------------------------------------------------
 
 Or you could recall that the `...` operator selects all commits
-contained reachable from either one reference or the other but not
+reachable from either one reference or the other but not
 both; so
 
 -------------------------------------------------
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@ You could just visually inspect the commits since e05db0fd:
 $ gitk e05db0fd..
 -------------------------------------------------
 
-Or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a
+or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a
I think I agree with Jonathan that this reads better with "Or", not
"or".

Other than that looks good to me.  Thanks.
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