Aw: Re: [PATCH 05/13] Fix some typos

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-Or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a
+or you can use linkgit:git-name-rev[1], which will give the commit a

I think this reads better with a capital 'O'.  (The pedant in me
likes it, too, since a colon ends a sentence.)

The lowercase 'but' later in this section should perhaps also be
capitalized, since it also starts an independent thought.

	But that may sometimes help you guess which tags come after the
	given commit.

I am no native speaker, but I am a little reluctant to start a new sentence
with "But" or "Or". 

The sentence "So, you can run something like ... then search for a
line that looks like ..." is a sequence of incomplete thoughts.  It
could be paraphrased a little to scan better:

	So, if you run something like "git show-branch e05db0fd
	v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2"

		$ git show-branch e05db0fd v1.5.0-rc0 v1.5.0-rc1 v1.5.0-rc2
		! [e05db...

	then a line like

		+ ++ [e05db0fd] Fix warnings in ...

	shows that e05db0fd is reachable from itself, from v1.5.0-rc1,
	and from v1.5.0-rc2, and not from v1.5.0-rc0.

OK; thanks! I will add this.

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-To see how submodule support works, create (for example) four example
+To see how submodule support works, create four example

I'd keep the joke.

I totally missed the joke ...


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Thomas