Re: [RFC PATCHv3] repack: rewrite the shell script in C.

On Aug 18, 2013, at 07:36, Stefan Beller wrote:

+			fprintf(stderr,
+				"WARNING: Some packs in use have been renamed by\n"
+				"WARNING: prefixing old- to their name, in order to\n"
+				"WARNING: replace them with the new version of the\n"
+				"WARNING: file.  But the operation failed, and\n"
+				"WARNING: attempt to rename them back to their\n"
+				"WARNING: original names also failed.\n"

Bad grammar "But the operation failed, and attempt to rename them ...".

How about "But the operation failed, and the attempt to rename  
them ..." instead.