Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording

From: "Junio C Hamano" <redacted>

Philip Oakley [off-list ref] writes:

quoted

Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit 
set
and the depth measure. Use two sentences.

Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
to read).

Accepted. My mistake - will correct.

            Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
sentence does make it easier to read, though.

Philip