Thanks for the feedback; new patch inbound. Minor nits:
quoted
diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
index f7815e9..92f97e6 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
@@ -956,7 +956,7 @@ $ git show-branch --topo-order --more=1 master mybranch
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The first two lines indicate that it is showing the two branches
-and the first line of the commit log message from their
+and the first paragraph of the commit log message from their
top-of-the-tree commits, you are currently on `master` branch
(notice the asterisk `\*` character), and the first column for
the later output lines is used to show commits contained in the
Ditto.
I did not substantially alter this. The emphasis of this section
is on the broader show-branch output, and belaboring the subject would
be distracting and unnecessary imho.
Cheers,
Jeremy