Thread (1 message) 1 message, 1 author, 2016-06-15

Re: [PATCH 1/5] Documentation: describe the format of messages with inline patches

From: Junio C Hamano <hidden>
Date: 2016-06-15 22:51:03
Subsystem: documentation, the rest · Maintainers: Jonathan Corbet, Linus Torvalds

Possibly related (same subject, not in this thread)

Drew Northup [off-list ref] writes:
Maybe I'm too picky, but I'd feel more comfortable saying:

...
dashes, and then sent as a message which in our example stars with
"arch/arm config files were..." On the receiving end, readers can save
...
Surely you are ;-) I am tempted to squash the following into it.

Thanks.

 Documentation/git-format-patch.txt |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt b/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt
index c20e0ed..eebfa5c 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-format-patch.txt
@@ -255,9 +255,9 @@ Do the same for ia64 so we can have sleek & trim looking
 
 Typically it will be placed in a MUA's drafts folder, edited to add
 timely commentary that should not go in the changelog after the three
-dashes, and then sent as a message whose body starts with "arch/arm
-config files were".  On the receiving end, readers can save
-interesting patches in a UNIX mailbox and apply them with
+dashes, and then sent as a message whose body, in our example, starts
+with "arch/arm config files were...".  On the receiving end, readers
+can save interesting patches in a UNIX mailbox and apply them with
 linkgit:git-am[1].
 
 When a patch is part of an ongoing discussion, the patch generated by
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