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Re: [PATCH 7/9] Documentation: clarify branch creation

From: Sean Estabrooks <hidden>
Date: 2016-06-15 22:47:29

On Fri, 9 Oct 2009 05:19:40 -0500
Jonathan Nieder [off-list ref] wrote:
+In the command's second form, creates a new branch named <branchname>.
+The branch will start out with head pointing to the commit
+<start-point>.  If no <start-point> is given, the branch will start
+out with head pointing to the tip of the currently checked out branch,
+or the currently checked out commit if no branch is checked out.
The first sentence here doesn't quite work, perhaps drop the "In".  But
the whole thing is a bit verbose, what about just:

The command's second form creates a new branch named <branchname> which
points to the current HEAD or <start-point> if given.
 <start-point>::
-	The new branch will be created with a HEAD equal to this.  It may
-	be given as a branch name, a commit-id, or a tag.  If this option
-	is omitted, the current branch is assumed.
+	The new branch head will point to this commit.  It may be
+	given as a branch name, a commit-id, or a tag.  If this
+	option is omitted, the currently checked out branch head
+	is used, or the current commit if no branch is checked
+	out.
Maybe it's not worth worrying about, but couldn't the last sentence
be just:

   If this option is omitted, the current HEAD will be used instead.

Sean

P.S.  Patches 3 and 4 in this series would be better as a single patch.
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