Thread (1 message) 1 message, 1 author, 2016-06-15

Re: [PATCH 1/3] Documentation: simplify refspec format description

From: Junio C Hamano <hidden>
Date: 2016-06-15 22:46:02

Anders Melchiorsen [off-list ref] writes:
quoted hunk
diff --git a/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt b/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
index ebdd948..820c140 100644
--- a/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
+++ b/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
 	of a remote (see the section <<REMOTES,REMOTES>> below).
 
 <refspec>::
-	The canonical format of a <refspec> parameter is
-	`+?<src>:<dst>`; that is, an optional plus `{plus}`, followed
-	by the source ref, followed by a colon `:`, followed by
-	the destination ref.
+	The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
+	`{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
+	by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
+	Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
 +
 The remote ref that matches <src>
 is fetched, and if <dst> is not empty string, the local
I think this is *much* nicer, but I do not think git-fetch.txt has
examples to fall back on.

The patch to git-push.txt would not have this issue; the exmaple is there
in the page itself.

But I think it might be even better to briefly describe what it means,
like this patch on top of yours does to git-push.txt.  The fetch/pull side
already has the corresponding description immediately after that, so I'd
suggest just removing the reference to non-existing examples section.

I found your 2/3 and 3/3 good improvements.

 Documentation/git-push.txt         |    3 ++-
 Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt |    3 +--
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git i/Documentation/git-push.txt w/Documentation/git-push.txt
index 3fd4bbb..ea45935 100644
--- i/Documentation/git-push.txt
+++ w/Documentation/git-push.txt
@@ -36,7 +36,8 @@ OPTIONS
 	The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
 	`{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
 	by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
-	Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
+	It is used to specify with what <src> object the <dst> ref
+	in the remote repository is to be updated.
 +
 The <src> side represents the source branch (or arbitrary
 "SHA1 expression", such as `master~4` (four parents before the
diff --git i/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt w/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
index 820c140..f9811f2 100644
--- i/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
+++ w/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
@@ -8,12 +8,11 @@
 	The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
 	`{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
 	by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
-	Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
 +
 The remote ref that matches <src>
 is fetched, and if <dst> is not empty string, the local
 ref that matches it is fast forwarded using <src>.
-Again, if the optional plus `+` is used, the local ref
+If the optional plus `+` is used, the local ref
 is updated even if it does not result in a fast forward
 update.
 +
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