Re: [PATCH 4/7] Documentation: git-init: --separate-git-dir: clarify

Linus Arver [off-list ref] writes:

Signed-off-by: Linus Arver <redacted>
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You would need to work on your justification skills ;-) in the log
message.  What does this change "clarify" and in what way?

On Tue, Aug 05, 2014 at 03:12:21PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:

Linus Arver [off-list ref] writes:

quoted

Signed-off-by: Linus Arver <redacted>
---

You would need to work on your justification skills ;-) in the log
message.  What does this change "clarify" and in what way?

Oops, sorry. I guess I should have written some more information in the
commit message, something like this:

    Use shorter sentences to describe what actually happens. We describe
    what the term "Git symbolic link" actually means.

    Also, we separate out the description of the behavioral change upon
    reinitialization into its own paragraph.

quoted

 Documentation/git-init.txt | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-init.txt b/Documentation/git-init.txt
index f21b85b..bf0a7ae 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-init.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-init.txt

@@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ DIRECTORY" section below.)
 
 --separate-git-dir=<git dir>::
 
-Instead of initializing the repository where it is supposed to be,
-place a filesytem-agnostic Git symbolic link there, pointing to the
-specified path, and initialize a Git repository at the path. The
-result is Git repository can be separated from working tree. If this
-is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified
-path.
+Separate the Git repository from your working tree.  Instead of initializing the
+repository as a directory to either `$GIT_DIR` or `./.git/`, create a text file
+there containing the path to the actual repository.  This file acts as
+filesystem-agnostic Git symbolic link to the repository.
++
+If this is reinitialization, the repository will be moved to the specified path.
 
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