Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording

Junio C Hamano [off-list ref] writes:

Philip Oakley [off-list ref] writes:

quoted

Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set
and the depth measure. Use two sentences.

Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
to read).  Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
sentence does make it easier to read, though.

Will add ',' locally and queue; no need to resend.

Thanks.

From: "Junio C Hamano" <redacted>

Junio C Hamano [off-list ref] writes:

quoted

Philip Oakley [off-list ref] writes:

quoted

Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit 
set
and the depth measure. Use two sentences.

Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
to read).  Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
sentence does make it easier to read, though.

Will add ',' locally and queue; no need to resend.

Thanks.

And the simple corrections to patches 5/6/7 ? Shall I send?
Philip