[PATCH] Fixed some grammatical errors in git-rebase.txt documentation.
From: Garry Dolley <hidden>
Date: 2016-06-15 22:45:24
Subsystem:
documentation, the rest · Maintainers:
Jonathan Corbet, Linus Torvalds
Generally, the dependent clause "for example" is suffixed with a comma. Used present tense where appropriate to be consistent with the other paragraphs. Rewrote the paragraph in the second hunk to be more clear. Signed-off-by: Garry Dolley <redacted> --- Documentation/git-rebase.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/git-rebase.txt b/Documentation/git-rebase.txt
index 59c1b02..32f0f12 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-rebase.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-rebase.txt@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ branch to another, to pretend that you forked the topic branch from the latter branch, using `rebase --onto`. First let's assume your 'topic' is based on branch 'next'. -For example feature developed in 'topic' depends on some +For example, a feature developed in 'topic' depends on some functionality which is found in 'next'. ------------
@@ -103,9 +103,9 @@ functionality which is found in 'next'. o---o---o topic ------------ -We would want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master', -for example because the functionality 'topic' branch depend on -got merged into more stable 'master' branch, like this: +We want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master'; for example, +because the functionality on which 'topic' depends was merged into the +more stable 'master' branch. We want our tree to look like this: ------------ o---o---o---o---o master
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